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Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Descriptive Paragraph on a picture

It was a windy evening. The "attack" from the sea was never stopping. The seaside was sooth and nice that my feet was buried in it. As the wave come the wind was stronger and the wave was bigger. There were a few happy families down the beach. One family was playing with a beach ball in the sea while some children were collecting seashells at the seashore.It was still early morning and there was a the fog covered my eyes. There was some dark figures at the far side of the beach. Even though the fog was not lifting, this does not stop the families from gaining happiness. 

1 comment:

  1. Not many adjectives that describe the picture. There was no beach ball so why you say got beach ball? @.@ 'gaining happiness' sounds weird and doesn't fit as you cannot gain happiness. There was also no dark figures, contrary to the description. Sound adjectives and more similes could be used to describe the picture.

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